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Read it, liked it, and thought that the pattern was too weak to fully convey the underlying sadness that seems pervasive in the poem.
]]> feeds@yuku.com (altoecko) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/202539 Fri, 22 May 2009 18:31:44 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/202531/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-202531 feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/202531 Mon, 18 May 2009 23:02:45 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/202503/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-202503 feeds@yuku.com (Bo the Almighty) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/202503 Sun, 17 May 2009 05:00:24 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/202433/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-202433


40. There was a time

There was a time
When I was new
I was invited
I was fun

There was a time
When I was noticed
I was remembered
I was missed

There was a... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/202433 Thu, 07 May 2009 19:01:23 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55182/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55182 :)
feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55182 Fri, 25 Aug 2006 05:17:41 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55181/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55181
What is this torture you're putting me through
What is this pain you expect me to deal with
How can I cope now that you're gone
Why the hell have you turned and left me
I just wish I knew what I did
I just want to know
How I could have been
So blind

What is this torture you're putting me through
How many lies lie behind your excuses
You think... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55181 Thu, 24 Aug 2006 06:51:11 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55180/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55180
I watch as waves are dancing
Lapping at my feet
Gulls are calling fondly
Searching for a treat

The ocean breeze is cool now
Blowing hints of doubt
The light is growing fainter
My candle’s almost out

All around me I see them
There’s traces of you here
It’s like I’m being haunted
They always seem so near

Whispered in the... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55180 Wed, 10 May 2006 08:10:47 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55179/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55179


As I Will So Mote It Be

I don’t wanna be like Cinderella
Sittin’ in a dark cold dusty cellar
... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55179 Mon, 10 Apr 2006 07:50:22 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55178/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55178

"You can find evil anywhere if you look for it. The problem is... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55178 Mon, 10 Apr 2006 06:34:23 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55177/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55177
Much strength I ask to send us soon
From you as silent as glowing moon
On my life I plea to this
A remnant of my loves last kiss
Protect him now from forces tall
He must not know of this at all
Such pride has he within his heart
It tears at mine for us to part
But things have changed and shadows grow
With this a seed of hope I sow
Upon my... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55177 Sun, 09 Apr 2006 04:30:16 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55176/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55176

"You can find evil anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55176 Fri, 24 Mar 2006 23:34:48 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55175/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55175
“As you wish"

And men are mad about my afternoon "tease"
They're quite informal I just do it to... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55175 Thu, 23 Mar 2006 03:23:05 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55174/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55174 :(
feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55174 Wed, 22 Mar 2006 20:32:30 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55173/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55173
The storms I watch
Across the skies
Reflect the ones
Within your eyes
The clouds that block
The glowing moon
Have moved into
Your heart too soon

So cold you stand
Away from me
We’ve been so close
How can it be
Too short we’ve had
A love so deep
To lose it now
No joy to reap

But here I stand
And... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55173 Wed, 22 Mar 2006 09:56:48 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55172/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55172

"You can find evil anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55172 Sat, 18 Mar 2006 00:14:20 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55171/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55171
“As you wish"

Sometimes I’m clueless and... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55171 Sun, 12 Mar 2006 03:50:20 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55170/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55170

"You can find evil anywhere if you look for it. The problem is... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55170 Wed, 08 Mar 2006 11:11:39 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55169/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55169
"Common once we're lacking now"

I love this line.

]]> feeds@yuku.com (Lady Morag) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55169 Thu, 02 Mar 2006 18:21:47 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55168/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55168

"You can find evil anywhere if you look for it. The problem is... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Philosojoker) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55168 Wed, 01 Mar 2006 09:26:28 GMT <![CDATA[ Re: My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/reply/55167/t/My-Poems-updated-.html#reply-55167
“As you wish"

Sometimes I’m clueless and I’m clumsy
But I’ve got friends that love me
... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/sreply/55167 Tue, 28 Feb 2006 21:38:39 GMT <![CDATA[ My Poems (updated) ]]> http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/topic/2311/t/My-Poems-updated-.html
As the larks murmur in the trees
The elves pass silently below
To the ships, they are headed
And the voyage across the sea

Never to return to Middle Earth, were they
Like creatures long dead before

They are silent as they pass
Some of them deep in thought
Thinking of the life they are leaving
Or what may be coming ahead

But one such elf, Arwen is... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Enelya Nemacil) http://bloodandiron91526.yuku.com/topic/2311 Sun, 24 Jul 2005 09:03:18 GMT