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Re: My Poems (updated) | #41 |
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Posts: 6121 03/08/06 11:11:39
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More! More! *Claps and dances in a circle*
 "You can find evil
anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds
you." - Philosojoker ------------------ "Do you mind if I
call you little darlin'?" - Philosojoker to
Xerxus "In order to find
his equal, an Irishman is forced to converse with God....
The Almighty says He can get me out of this, but He's
pretty sure you're f*cked.
Bwahaha!" |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #42 |
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Posts: 9946 03/12/06 03:50:20
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I don't have more, it's been hard enough spitting
something out for contests.
“As
you wish"  Sometimes I’m clueless and I’m clumsy But I’ve got friends that love me And they know just where I stand It’s all a part of me That’s who I am |
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Philosojoker |
Re: My Poems (updated) | #43 |
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Posts: 6121 03/18/06 00:14:20
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Could have fooled me.
"You can find evil
anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds
you." - Philosojoker ------------------ "Do you mind if I
call you little darlin'?" - Philosojoker to
Xerxus "In order to find
his equal, an Irishman is forced to converse with God....
The Almighty says He can get me out of this, but He's
pretty sure you're f*cked.
Bwahaha!" |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #44 |
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Posts: 9946 03/22/06 09:56:48
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36. Thousand Pieces
The storms I watch Across the skies Reflect the ones Within your eyes The clouds that block The glowing moon Have moved into Your heart too soon So cold you stand Away from me We’ve been so close How can it be Too short we’ve had A love so deep To lose it now No joy to reap But here I stand And silently cry As being with her You try to deny I watch you go With a heavy heart Into a thousand pieces I slowly break apart I pray each night That you’re still here You haven’t left me I’ve nothing to fear But then I wake And I’m all alone There’s nothing for comfort But my heart’s empty drone “As
you wish" And men are mad about my afternoon "tease" They're quite informal I just do it to please Those triple sandwiches are my favorite ones I must admit, I'm partial to buns |
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Philosojoker |
Re: My Poems (updated) | #45 |
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Posts: 6121 03/22/06 20:32:30
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Loverly. I especially like that last line. Very
saddening.
 "You can find evil
anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds
you." - Philosojoker ------------------ "Do you mind if I
call you little darlin'?" - Philosojoker to
Xerxus "In order to find
his equal, an Irishman is forced to converse with God....
The Almighty says He can get me out of this, but He's
pretty sure you're f*cked.
Bwahaha!" |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #46 |
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Posts: 9946 03/23/06 03:23:05
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Thank you
“As
you wish" And men are mad about my afternoon "tease" They're quite informal I just do it to please Those triple sandwiches are my favorite ones I must admit, I'm partial to buns |
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Philosojoker |
Re: My Poems (updated) | #47 |
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Posts: 6121 03/24/06 23:34:48
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Loverly.
"You can find evil
anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds
you." - Philosojoker ------------------ "Do you mind if I
call you little darlin'?" - Philosojoker to
Xerxus "In order to find
his equal, an Irishman is forced to converse with God....
The Almighty says He can get me out of this, but He's
pretty sure you're f*cked.
Bwahaha!" |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #48 |
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Posts: 9946 04/09/06 04:30:16
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37. So Mote It Be
Much strength I ask to send us soon From you as silent as glowing moon On my life I plea to this A remnant of my loves last kiss Protect him now from forces tall He must not know of this at all Such pride has he within his heart It tears at mine for us to part But things have changed and shadows grow With this a seed of hope I sow Upon my life I grant him peace And for such evil powers to cease Protect him now I beg of thee As I will so mote it be “As you wish" And I'm on tonight You know my hips don't lie And I am starting to feel you boy Come on lets go, real slow Don't you see baby asi es perfecto |
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Philosojoker |
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Posts: 6121 04/10/06 06:34:23
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I like the plea to the moon. Just loverly.
"You can find evil
anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds
you." - Philosojoker ------------------ "Do you mind if I
call you little darlin'?" - Philosojoker to
Xerxus "In order to find
his equal, an Irishman is forced to converse with God....
The Almighty says He can get me out of this, but He's
pretty sure you're f*cked.
Bwahaha!" |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #50 |
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Posts: 9946 04/10/06 07:50:22
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Thank you
As I Will So Mote It Be I don’t wanna be like Cinderella Sittin’ in a dark cold dusty cellar Waiting for somebody to come and set me free I don’t wanna be like someone waiting For a handsome prince to come and save me |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #51 |
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Posts: 9946 05/10/06 08:10:47
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38. Ocean Dreams
I watch as waves are dancing Lapping at my feet Gulls are calling fondly Searching for a treat The ocean breeze is cool now Blowing hints of doubt The light is growing fainter My candle’s almost out All around me I see them There’s traces of you here It’s like I’m being haunted They always seem so near Whispered in the wind I think I hear your name I swear that I can see you It’s always been the same The stars have all come out now The birds back to their nest I can’t help but remember you Diving ‘neath that wave’s last crest As I Will So Mote It Be You're the prayer I pray when I'm on my knees The oxygen that lets me breathe The flame that burns inside me all the time Every note of a beautiful melody The perfect rhyme in poetry Baby, you are everything but mine |
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Enelya Nemacil |
My Poems (updated) | #52 |
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Posts: 9946 08/24/06 06:51:11
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39. Walk On By
What is this torture you're putting me through What is this pain you expect me to deal with How can I cope now that you're gone Why the hell have you turned and left me I just wish I knew what I did I just want to know How I could have been So blind What is this torture you're putting me through How many lies lie behind your excuses You think it's funny to see me cry Pity has never been your strong point You just walk on out of my life Just how long will it be Before I can laugh Again What is this torture you're putting me through Why do I still feel this pull towards you You tell me you will do whatever you want You think that should be enough for me I'm just an inconvenience to you Why should I want You Back What is this torture you're putting me through Why this hell that I will never deal with Go ahead and mock the tears in my eyes As you head into the bed of another Is it so much to ask for love As you just walk On By "As You Wish" I'm not here for your entertainment You don't really want to mess with me tonight Just stop and take a second I was fine before you walked into my life Cause you know it's over Before it began Keep your drink just give me the money It's just you and your hand tonight |
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Re: My Poems (updated) | #53 |
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Posts: 6121 08/25/06 05:17:41
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I really, really, really like Ocean Dreams. *Feels
the wind make his flame flicker*
 "You can find evil
anywhere if you look for it. The problem is when it finds
you." - Philosojoker ------------------ "Struck?"
A cheerful terrier grin was in the very tone.
"Why sir, I have not yet begun to
fight!" -Captain John Paul Jones of
the Bonhomme
Richard "In order to find
his equal, an Irishman is forced to converse with the
Almighty." |
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Enelya Nemacil |
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Posts: 9934 05/07/09 19:01:23
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First poem in three years, my how time flies. And for those who remember me talking about Joey, the object of apparently several previous poems, he is engaged.
To the girl he chose to ignore me for. And I pretend to be thrilled. But this one, is not about him.
40. There was a time There was a time When I was new I was invited I was fun There was a time When I was noticed I was remembered I was missed There was a time When I was interesting I was important I was there There was a time Before all that That was different That was habit, not choice Here is that time again Much like before It is quiet It is familiar I miss being missed I miss being remembered I miss being there I miss when it was new When it was interesting When it was fun Do they miss me too I wonder Do they remember I was there That it was them Who made me important Who chose me to be new "As you wish"
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Posts: 16395 05/17/09 05:00:24
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that's depressing
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Posts: 9939 05/18/09 23:02:45
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It is a bit, I suppose.
"As you wish"
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altoecko |
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Posts: 6189 05/22/09 18:31:44 Optimist Prime
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(I'm not sure if you wanted it to just be read, said good/bad, or if you wanted criticism so I'll go through each)
Read it, liked it, and thought that the pattern was too weak to fully convey the underlying sadness that seems pervasive in the poem. |
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